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Author Topic: [Menu Background] - [andreyyy] - [Right In Front Of You]  (Read 17314 times)

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[Menu Background] - [andreyyy] - [Right In Front Of You]
« on: July 12, 2014, 07:27:25 am »

update
-better shadows
-moved autogun
-door



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« Last Edit: September 07, 2014, 08:15:26 am by andreyyy »
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Re: [Menu Background] - [andreyyy] - [Right In Front Of You]
« Reply #1 on: July 12, 2014, 07:35:18 am »

Hot stuff :c1:

Spy's back shoulder (his left one) feels anatomically off probably because the offcenter angle isn't quite there (tie should be right under the end of the ski mask)
Head feel a bit rounder than I'd like

The background door ruins the perspective just a tad, or maybe it's the table that's not large enough to make the perspective convincing enough

Any chance of a smoking gun? :P
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Re: [Menu Background] - [andreyyy] - [Right In Front Of You]
« Reply #2 on: July 12, 2014, 08:05:15 am »

swag

I suck at art and things so I can't tell if that's really good but I like it :3
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Re: [Menu Background] - [andreyyy] - [Right In Front Of You]
« Reply #3 on: July 12, 2014, 11:13:47 am »

this is really great, this community's pixel artists continue to impress me
the engie shotgun doesnt look quite right and the table has a little notch in it which I'm not sure should be there, but other than that I love it

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Re: [Menu Background] - [andreyyy] - [Right In Front Of You]
« Reply #4 on: July 12, 2014, 11:27:14 am »

The background door ruins the perspective just a tad, or maybe it's the table that's not large enough to make the perspective convincing enough
I dont see big problems with the door but honestly I dont like the table and the sentry either. Gonna make the table kinda larger and maybe replace the sentry or make it more, realistic, idk
Any chance of a smoking gun? :P
good idea
Spy's back shoulder (his left one) feels anatomically off probably because the offcenter angle isn't quite there (tie should be right under the end of the ski mask)
Head feel a bit rounder than I'd like
I was standing like 10 minutes in front of a mirror like an idiot to see how it looks like and this was my best result but i'll see what I can do

this is really great, this community's pixel artists continue to impress me
the engie shotgun doesnt look quite right and the table has a little notch in it which I'm not sure should be there, but other than that I love it
:hehe:
yeah ill look at it
« Last Edit: July 12, 2014, 11:37:27 am by andreyyy »
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Re: [Menu Background] - [andreyyy] - [Right In Front Of You]
« Reply #5 on: July 12, 2014, 01:27:59 pm »

omg so cool

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Re: [Menu Background] - [andreyyy] - [Right In Front Of You]
« Reply #6 on: July 12, 2014, 02:00:56 pm »

neat
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Re: [Menu Background] - [andreyyy] - [Right In Front Of You]
« Reply #7 on: July 13, 2014, 10:59:10 am »

changes
-gun smoke
-replaced table
-shadows
-engi's shotgun
-some other things
-still dont know what to do with the sentry

« Last Edit: July 13, 2014, 11:10:11 am by andreyyy »
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Re: [Menu Background] - [andreyyy] - [Right In Front Of You]
« Reply #8 on: July 13, 2014, 01:16:01 pm »

Hey man, cool background  :c1:
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Re: [Menu Background] - [andreyyy] - [Right In Front Of You]
« Reply #9 on: July 14, 2014, 03:40:25 am »

god damnit i should have thought of this

 :yaymoney: though; great entry. Digging the revolver, but the door in the background isn't saturated enough for my tastes. Just glancing at it I thought it was some paintball gun the spy was holding for a moment.
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Re: [Menu Background] - [andreyyy] - [Right In Front Of You]
« Reply #10 on: July 14, 2014, 04:16:05 am »

I originally thought the shotty was a wrench in its original version :P Table looks a lot better.

Hmm, I wonder if a blue door...
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« Reply #11 on: July 14, 2014, 11:58:34 am »

Also, just noticed how the hand is huge af. Have the pinky (and maybe ring finger too) curl in back a bit so it isn't so prominent.
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« Reply #12 on: July 14, 2014, 12:05:27 pm »

Also, just noticed how the hand is huge af. Have the pinky (and maybe ring finger too) curl in back a bit so it isn't so prominent.
Spy has manly sized hands :P
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Re: [Menu Background] - [andreyyy] - [Right In Front Of You]
« Reply #13 on: July 14, 2014, 03:05:02 pm »

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Re: [Menu Background] - [andreyyy] - [Right In Front Of You]
« Reply #14 on: July 20, 2014, 02:26:39 am »

 :c8:
Nice shadows...
 :c9:
...but you should use more colors foe one shadow area.
This under the table... Is it sentry gun?
Broken (trigger) finger

7/10
Why the table lost a part?
Cards?
« Last Edit: July 20, 2014, 02:34:14 am by Orph »
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