This is still a lot better than your first maps, but please, keep a part of ctf_truefort or whatever official map next to yours when you work on it so you have an idea of the proportions.
Something that I notice a lot in your maps, too, is that you tend to make 1 pixel-thick lines. This is annoying because you can't tell if something is completly solid or if you can get inside it from somewhere.
Thus, some parts are completly irrealistic.
Try to describe most of the structures in your map while thinking about how they're solid. For example, the first map's first point is on a simple line which could be the floor of a building. This sounds realistic for now, but the pillars supporting the building are solid- but can still be gone through ! This makes no sense, right ?
Try viewing your maps like you were the in-game characters, but in first person. How would the spiral-shaped passageway in the third stage look like ?
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