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Author Topic: Creative Writing and Poetry Thread  (Read 16220 times)

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Re: Creative Writing and Poetry Thread
« Reply #75 on: April 30, 2010, 09:00:56 pm »

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Re: Creative Writing and Poetry Thread
« Reply #76 on: April 30, 2010, 09:32:10 pm »

What spelling and grammar errors?  :hehe:
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Re: Creative Writing and Poetry Thread
« Reply #77 on: April 30, 2010, 10:58:17 pm »

Starting sentences with "but" and "because."
It's a legitimate sentence. Subordinate clause preceding the independent clause geez. As if you're still following 3rd grade grammar rules.

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Re: Creative Writing and Poetry Thread
« Reply #78 on: April 30, 2010, 11:00:11 pm »

It's correct in the same way that mixed modifiers are correct: not.
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Re: Creative Writing and Poetry Thread
« Reply #79 on: April 30, 2010, 11:15:52 pm »

Spelling, fix'd.
Also, the tense was correct.
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Re: Creative Writing and Poetry Thread
« Reply #80 on: September 05, 2018, 01:12:05 am »

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Re: Creative Writing and Poetry Thread
« Reply #81 on: September 05, 2018, 07:36:51 pm »

lol just when i need to write one for college app

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Re: Creative Writing and Poetry Thread
« Reply #82 on: September 06, 2018, 02:50:58 pm »

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