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Author Topic: Creative Writing and Poetry Thread  (Read 16491 times)

Scarlett Ptista

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Creative Writing and Poetry Thread
« on: March 29, 2010, 11:21:43 pm »

Ive been writing again, and alot lately. Most is for school, but some is actually decent. I'll post my most recent short story tomorrow. Poetry is welcome and appreciated as well, mine wont be seen here, though.

Post your stories, poems, essays ect here!
There's alot of wicked smart, talented kids here, cant wait to see your works




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Re: Creative Writing and Poetry Thread
« Reply #1 on: March 29, 2010, 11:26:02 pm »

Hey there was already one of these, I saw you looking at it!

Maybe I'll put some stuff up.

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Re: Creative Writing and Poetry Thread
« Reply #2 on: March 29, 2010, 11:29:43 pm »

You stalking 'whose online'? :P

Really, I saw, but wanted to include a bit more than just poetry... Man I wish Indie was around to contribute...

And please do!
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Re: Creative Writing and Poetry Thread
« Reply #3 on: March 29, 2010, 11:33:57 pm »

Written about/for my girlfriend, after a rough spot in our relationship. It has a lot of song titles/lyrics worked into it.

How can One be so perfect, yet so flawed?
A perfect being,
Caring, Loving, Mature.
A perfect match,
Wishes and desires.

A flawed ideal,
Purity, Priority, Youth.
A flawed Love,
Hurting as much as it helps.
Missing One inside of me.


My Love for You, a Double-edged Sword,
Gives me Hope, Courage and neverending support,
Cuts deep into my heart.
It wounds, it scars,
Tearing me apart.
Yet it grows ever stronger.

I stagger on,
This force of nature holding me up
And pushing me down.


Stare into my eyes,
Look upon my soul.
Which of me do You see?

Hunted.
Feelings deep inside
Eating away
Causing Decay
Never safe.

Hunter.
Feelings deep inside
Chasing Dreams
Hope it seems
Never safe.


Lost without You,
Lost even with You.
Neverending battle.
Groping, gasping, through a
Labyrinth of Sorrow.


You make me Alive.
Here I live, breathing, feeling.
But the dead have no feeling
Of pain, of sorrow.
Now who is better off?

In comes the pain.
Down, down
Your tears
Fall like rain.
Soaking me to the core,
Bones chilled, gasping for air,
Hypothermia sets in.

Sheer cold.
Depression, sadness, fear.
All of these you give to me.
Neverending Love.

Sheer Joy.
Happiness, warmth, Hope.
All of these you give to me.
Neverending Love.

Why must this emotion
Be a maze of complex feelings,
Twisting, turning,
Winding, binding.
Getting lost within myself,
Will You be the Light that finds,
And bring me home?

The fire burns within You.
Share it with me,
Create sweet harmony
Song of healing
Soaring over to me.
Ray of sunshine,
Your smile.
Ray of Hope.

Through suffering,
Through struggle,
Through strife.
One Champion stands.
Ready to strike down my fears,
To settle my uncertainties,
To pamper me with Love
To want me
To need me
To Love me.

Sweet, tender Loving care
Adopting my body
Nurturing my spirit
Detaining my heart
Yet giving me hers

Longing, Loving, lamenting
Opening her mind and spirit
Never forgetting
Gives me all I need.

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Re: Creative Writing and Poetry Thread
« Reply #4 on: March 29, 2010, 11:44:11 pm »

Haikus from the man himself:

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Got your girl's legs spread;
my smooth moves damn well fixed her.
A real good mixture.
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Re: Creative Writing and Poetry Thread
« Reply #5 on: March 30, 2010, 02:05:13 pm »

It's a real good mixture.
One too many.
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Re: Creative Writing and Poetry Thread
« Reply #6 on: March 30, 2010, 02:25:41 pm »

HAIKU BY JOEBUCKS
MY NAME IS JOEBUCKS
THIS IS THE POETRY THREAD
THIS IS A POEM
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Re: Creative Writing and Poetry Thread
« Reply #7 on: March 30, 2010, 04:28:56 pm »

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Re: Creative Writing and Poetry Thread
« Reply #8 on: March 30, 2010, 09:17:25 pm »

Written about/for my girlfriend, after a rough spot in our relationship. It has a lot of song titles/lyrics worked into it.

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I loved it...

Did you set it to music?
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Re: Creative Writing and Poetry Thread
« Reply #9 on: March 30, 2010, 09:28:04 pm »

One day scout went to bed,
but the heavy weapons guy was not fed.

So he got up and made him lunch,
He had to make a bunch.

The heavy ate and ate,
The scout said it was getting late.

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Re: Creative Writing and Poetry Thread
« Reply #10 on: March 30, 2010, 09:29:04 pm »

Written about/for my girlfriend, after a rough spot in our relationship. It has a lot of song titles/lyrics worked into it.

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I loved it...

Did you set it to music?

No, but that was my mindset, to create something that could be.

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Re: Creative Writing and Poetry Thread
« Reply #11 on: March 30, 2010, 09:30:04 pm »

My scarecrow poem

my life is like a scarecrow wearing a slipknot shirt
scarring people away with my open mindedness
No one understands me
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Re: Creative Writing and Poetry Thread
« Reply #12 on: March 30, 2010, 09:33:51 pm »

THIS IS A POEM ABOUT TRIGRAR'S CAT

Trigrar had a cat
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« Reply #13 on: March 30, 2010, 09:38:49 pm »

THIS IS A POEM ABOUT TRIGRAR'S CAT

Trigrar had a cat
It was fat
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After eating a rat
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One time there was an ugly joebucks.
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Re: Creative Writing and Poetry Thread
« Reply #14 on: March 30, 2010, 09:45:55 pm »

THIS IS A POEM ABOUT TRIGRAR'S CAT

Trigrar had a cat
It was fat
One day it sat
Onto a mat
After eating a rat
And it found a bat
That was wearing a hat
Then it listened to Ratt
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One time there was an ugly joebucks.
it was so ugly, everybody died.
thats not funny, my brother died that way :z7:
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